tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post26377047962946088..comments2017-06-19T14:18:48.042+12:00Comments on Vaughn @ Parkvale: Sprint RaceSarah Lovehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15133469831463353634noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-50532392887305800592017-06-19T14:10:32.839+12:002017-06-19T14:10:32.839+12:00I like your Exaggeration poem Vaughn. I like that...I like your Exaggeration poem Vaughn. I like that you did the feeling when you are actually running because That's what I feel like when I am sprinting at the cross country. I also like how you added a picture of Bolt because he is running like he was powered by a wire. Another thing I liked is how you said Begin because most people start with just start saying about how they feel instead of saying Begin. Good Punctuation and Capital Letters that's exactly what you should be doing so good job. I also liked how you explained how to do a exaggeration poem because some people don't know how to do one so that's pretty good to add that in. I like how you choose a different topic to lots of other people because lots of people choose like sour lollies or something ( me ). Nice Job Vaughn :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-52833677184039510042017-06-12T14:24:38.556+12:002017-06-12T14:24:38.556+12:00Nice Exaggeration poem Vaughn! I liked how you add...Nice Exaggeration poem Vaughn! I liked how you added detail. I also liked how you added some complex words like sprinting than fast and I liked how you said ( like I was powered by some wire ). Overall great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-20855532616914456802017-06-06T14:01:26.556+12:002017-06-06T14:01:26.556+12:00Great poem Vaughn and also I wonder how much milom...Great poem Vaughn and also I wonder how much milometers he can run in two hours and how fun was it at your guys camp I bet it was super fun there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-1459854232440267262017-05-29T14:09:29.051+12:002017-05-29T14:09:29.051+12:00I like the spicy pepper poem because it rhymes. Gr...I like the spicy pepper poem because it rhymes. Great poem Vaughn. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-4318991497257298722017-05-22T14:01:31.331+12:002017-05-22T14:01:31.331+12:00I like your sprint race.It has a lot of detail. Wh...I like your sprint race.It has a lot of detail. What a great poem Vaughn. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-90961836259643578242017-05-22T13:52:42.969+12:002017-05-22T13:52:42.969+12:00I love your poem Vaughn especially And off we went...I love your poem Vaughn especially And off we went Feet lifting off the ground I was sprinting and sprinting At the speed of sound. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-20761932632580319142017-05-15T14:14:16.772+12:002017-05-15T14:14:16.772+12:00i love how it is a big exaggeration in the spicy p...i love how it is a big exaggeration in the spicy peeper it makes me laugh when i read it thankyou for a great poem Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-73037215850285057182017-05-15T14:14:07.801+12:002017-05-15T14:14:07.801+12:00Hello Vaughn I like how you have put lots of detai...Hello Vaughn I like how you have put lots of detail into your Exaggeration poem i like how you said ricocheted even though i do not know what that means it sounds awesome.:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5112917283598326817.post-75757647912724355482017-05-15T14:13:59.162+12:002017-05-15T14:13:59.162+12:00Well done on your post and really like how much de...Well done on your post and really like how much detail and effort you put in this post. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com